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Ines Sorgho

ENG110

Professor:Macdonal

When was the last time you took care of your mind? Do you know the advantages of being positive? It is the key to success. I’m the testimony of that. You must be  careful about what you think.

The power of positive thinking

Peale, Norman Vincent, 1898-1993

 BETTER MENTAL HEATH AND PHYSICAL HEALTH

Relance of audience: It is very important because today being motivated, having a strong mental health is the key to success because today avoid going fast because you will get tired very quickly. The audience is all the people who want to be better.

Credibility material: this book shows us the advantages about our mind.

About this book available in Hostos library, the practice of positive thinking increases ability tremendously for two reasons. First because it uncovers talents that before were locked up, then calls hitherto unknown resources and second, it keeps the mind in focus by curtailing fear, worry and anxiety all enemies of success. Positive thinking help 90% to reduce stress, anxiety and depression and blood pressure. be positive, be motivated and put down the level of the pain.

So, if you have a strong mind and good physical It means you can do everything you want you can achieve you goals and careers. You can be successful with your goals.

This source shows the advantages of being positive in your mind.it can be positive for you body health and physical health.

 Unleashing the positive power of differences : polarity thinking in our schools

Kise, Jane A. G., author.2024

II.Improve relationships

Relance of audience: the audience of this book is teenagers and students

This books shows us that Making the most of potential obstacles, trying to see the best in other peoples, and viewing yourself and your abilities in a positive light. Be motivated doesn’t stop obstacles but give you stronger to improve your relationships witch other persons in your work or activities. You are not afraid to dare so be free to

According to Dr NORVAN who is the father of positive thinking, “positive organizational behavior constitutes the study of positive human strengths and competencies, how it can be facilitated, assessed and managed to improve performance in the workplace. It showcases the cutting edge of this challenging new area within organizational behavior.

III.INCREASE THE HAPPINESS

Relance of audience

Credibility material:

Happiness starts in the mind. If you have a strong mentality, it increases your joy.

Staying positive is close to lifting your

whole mood and makes everything feel a little lighter.

According to the book of Dr NOMAN, to be happy and content in life you must take control of the thoughts in your mind, avoid negative thoughts and replace them with more positive

You can increase your energy ones.

VIDEO on YouTube: Power of the positive thinking by Dr Norman Vincent

Relance of audience: the audience here is all people using social media

Credibility material: he uses easy language to convince about having strong mind

The power of positive thinking is the key to success. If you control your thoughts, you control your life so you will go where you decide to go. You will achieve your goals despite the difficulties. Developing methods to modify prospective thinking is important because difficulties in prospection have been linked to the experience of psychological distress, including depression. Individuals evidencing both clinical and non-clinical levels of depressive symptomatology exhibit difficulties in episodic simulation tasks, characterized by a shift away from the generation and use of episodic details in favor of semantic information (7-10mn). Moreover, it seems that positive episodic simulation is particularly difficult for depressed individuals; that is, they have difficulty generating vivid simulations of positive, but not negative, future occurrences (11-17). In addition to difficulties with simulation, depression is associated with biased future expectations. Negative future events are believed to be more likely to occur, whilst expectations about positive future events, including achievement of personal goals, are muted (13,15,18-20).

Conclusion: The rhetorical refers to the art of persuasion or the technique used to influence an audience. So you should have an audience et know your audience to convince. You might hear about a rhetorical analysis which is a type of essay that examines how an author uses rhetorical strategies to persuade___________________________

Draft 2 (600 words)

___Assignment 2

Ines Sorgho

ENG110

Prof:Macdonal

Topic: The power of positive thinking

When was the last time you took care of your mind? Do you know the advantages of being positive? It is the key to success. I’m the testimony of that. You must be careful about what you think.

BETTER MENTAL HEATH AND PHYSICAL HEALTH

Relance of audience: It is very important because today being motivated, having a strong mental health is the key to success because today avoid going fast because you will get tired very quickly. The audience is all the people who want to be better.

Credibility material: this book shows us the advantages about our mind.

About this book available in Hostos library, the practice of positive thinking increases ability tremendously for two reasons. First because it uncovers talents that before were locked up, then calls hitherto unknown resources and second, it keeps the mind in focus by curtailing fear, worry and anxiety all enemies of success. Positive thinking helps 90% to reduce stress, anxiety and depression and blood pressure. be positive, be motivated and put down the level of the pain.

So, if you have a strong mind and good physical It means you can do everything you want you can achieve you goals and careers. You can be successful with your goals.

This source shows the advantages of being positive in your mind.it can be positive for you body health and physical health.

Peale, Norman Vincent, 1898-1993

II. Improve relationships

Unleashing the positive power of differences : polarity thinking in our schools

Kise, Jane A. G., author.2024

Relance of audience: the audience of this book is teenagers and students

This book shows us that Making the most of potential obstacles, trying to see the best in other peoples, and viewing yourself and your abilities in a positive light. Be motivated doesn’t stop obstacles but give you stronger to improve your relationships witch other persons in your work or activities. You are not afraid to dare so be free to

According to Dr NORVAN who is the father of positive thinking, “positive organizational behavior constitutes the study of positive human strengths and competencies, how it can be facilitated, assessed and managed to improve performance in the workplace. It showcases the cutting edge of this challenging new area within organizational behavior.

III.INCREASE THE HAPPINESS

Relance of audience

Credibility material:

Happiness starts in the mind. If you have a strong mentality, it increases your joy.

Staying positive is close to lifting your

whole mood and makes everything feel a little lighter.

According to the book of Dr NOMAN, to be happy and content in life you must take control of the thoughts in your mind, avoid negative thoughts and replace them with more positive

You can increase your energy ones.

VIDEO on YouTube: Power of the positive thinking by Dr Norman Vincent

Relance of audience: the audience here is all people using social media

Credibility material: he uses easy language to convince about having strong mind

The power of positive thinking is the key to success. If you control your thoughts, you control your life so you will go where you decide to go. You will achieve your goals despite the difficulties. Developing methods to modify prospective thinking is important because difficulties in prospection have been linked to the experience of psychological distress, including depression. Individuals evidencing both clinical and non-clinical levels of depressive symptomatology exhibit difficulties in episodic simulation tasks, characterized by a shift away from the generation and use of episodic details in favor of semantic information (7-10mn). Moreover, it seems that positive episodic simulation is particularly difficult for depressed individuals; that is, they have difficulty generating vivid simulations of positive, but not negative, future occurrences (11-17). In addition to difficulties with simulation, depression is associated with biased future expectations. Negative future events are believed to be more likely to occur, whilst expectations about positive future events, including achievement of personal goals, are muted (13,15,18-20).

Conclusion: The rhetorical refers to the art of persuasion or the technique used to influence an audience. So you should have an audience to know your audience to convince. You might hear about a rhetorical analysis which is a type of essay that examines how an author uses rhetorical strategies to persuade___________________________

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Complete assignment (750 words)